Damn, writing’s a lot of work. I’ve been struggling with a tough scene for weeks. There’s a lot going on in this one. But that’s good. I like scenes that have more than one purpose. The setting is a poker game but the real action is:1. A betrayal.
2. Showing the sexual tension between the hero and his adversary/love interest..
3. Two villains join forces.
4. Demonstrating once again that if the townspeople don’t work together the whole town is headed for disaster.
I think a montage and lots of bees will help pull this scene off.
We’ll see.
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